We were expressly told “No skinnydipping” at the end-of-camp staff party. Because of this, and despite having drunk more beer than ever, my heart races and my mouth dries as I drop my shorts on the sand. I pull my shirt over my head, set my glasses on top of the pile. I turn toward my swimming partner: already naked, knee-deep in the water, watching me undress. In the half-light, I can see the creamy color of her skin, the blob that is her dyed-black hair, her awkward lanky limbs, a spot which must be the patch between her legs. But no detail! My glasses! The first time a girl shows me her naked body and I can’t see it! But I can’t wear them if I am to go into the water, where touching might be possible. “Damn,” I swear aloud. She takes it as a compliment, asking, “Is this the first time you’ve seen a girl naked?” She turns and half-runs/half-dives into the dark water. I follow, swim up to her. “What are we supposed to do next?,” I ask. “What do you want to do next?” she asks back, brushing against my hip with hers. My fear of the camp director leaves me and I am faced with a new fear: of everything I ever wanted being laid out in front of me for the taking.

Oh, that was wonderful. So full of youthful yearning, fear, and anticipation. Well done.
I’m so used to myopia that i hadn’t even considered this drawback to it. I just didn’t see it. My vision has been corrected.
Revisits teenage awkwardness in a way that made me squirm. I think that’s a good thing.
Such a wonderful “coming of age” story. He’s such a great protagonist– eager, young, afraid, wanting. The details were excellent. Loved how he said “damn” and she misconstrued his intent– that was a great choice you made for him
Love the tentativeness of the narrator, his insecurity without his glasses (oh, how I identify!). Adolescence, away camp, pine forests… all came roaring back. Peace…
I admire how the tension about the glasses quickly gets replaced by more pressing concerns, and I love the closing line! Great stuff here.
John
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