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Her engagement announcement arrived this morning. He retells the story so that it came like a calling card placed on an elephant foot umbrella stand in his hallway. De gustibus non est disputandum. Their stories were once intertwined. With the announcement arrived an invitation to a party. It was not an engagement party but rather another small-town event the story of which her celebration would retell. He decides not to go. De gustibus non est disputandum. |
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The Announcement by Stephen Hastings-King
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Nice.
I like the parallel bars, and the abstraction is just right for this episode.
I love how you frame your stories, the circularity of them. Can’t shake that elephant foot umbrella stand now. Peace…
Short and descriptive. I agree that the parrelells work well in this. Nicely done.
thanks, comrades. glad you like the piece.
i hesitated about leaving the parallel structure in place, but in the end decided that it felt like keeping in distributed a kind of weight correctly.
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