The Announcement by Stephen Hastings-King

Her engagement announcement arrived this morning. He retells the story so that it came like a calling card placed on an elephant foot umbrella stand in his hallway. De gustibus non est disputandum.

Their stories were once intertwined.
Then she told him he was not practical.
He stopped listening.
If things were different, she said.
He thought: How strange this moment of nothing to say.
Their stories once intertwined became parallel

With the announcement arrived an invitation to a party. It was not an engagement party but rather another small-town event the story of which her celebration would retell. He decides not to go. De gustibus non est disputandum.

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6 Responses to The Announcement by Stephen Hastings-King

  1. guy

    I like the parallel bars, and the abstraction is just right for this episode.

  2. I love how you frame your stories, the circularity of them. Can’t shake that elephant foot umbrella stand now. Peace…

  3. Ganymeder

    Short and descriptive. I agree that the parrelells work well in this. Nicely done.

  4. stephen

    thanks, comrades. glad you like the piece.

    i hesitated about leaving the parallel structure in place, but in the end decided that it felt like keeping in distributed a kind of weight correctly.

  5. Pingback: Week #22 – The brutality of friends « 52|250 A Year of Flash

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