| The box kite floats high over the marsh. You follow the string and its downward trailing arc across an abstract blue field past the curious geometrical forms of white and yellow & a cloud of mechanical birds that wobbles their machine trajectories through modalities of falling & choose one & watch its fall toward the point of its absorption as on another surface a human shape separates from a cube in the ochre and green of the grasses, moving toward you carrying two long poles each with a red flag. The forms moves toward you then stop: flags blur hesitate, blur hesitate some kind of message incomprehensible across distance and distortion.
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ouch. I suspect the lines of the kite are not the ones prompting his actions! Well done.
thanks for reading and for the comment. this one’s been around a while…i keep going back to it and tinkering with it then putting it away again. i wanted it to look like a box kite. i keep thinking about making a kite from it somehow.
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