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I Harry’s cut is a two-step bowl: flat across the bottom straight up the II – He made the trains run on time. – Bullshit, Harry. You left. What do you know about it? – Get out. – You’re not done. – Get out of my shop. – Finish your job, then i go. Harry spreads his left hand across the customer’s face and holds him – Get out of my fucking shop. III Harry swats at flies. He checks the sky above 12th St. and thinks – I’m going for a coffee. – OK, Harry, i got you covered. The light at the corner turns red. She stops, eyes fixed on the light. The light turns green and she crosses. Harry stays on the corner. – |
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Portrait of the artist as an old man by Guy Yasko
Filed under Guy Yasko

I need to read this one a couple of times; I’m not used to the segmented stories yet. But I see an intimate look at and inside your character of Harry. Nice.
I’m sorry, but I didn’t quite get what happened here. I was interested in the character though from the very beginning. :)
Thanks for the feedback. I didn’t intend it to be a sequence, but i suppose the I, II, III would one to believe that is what it is.
Oops Make that “would lead one to believe”
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