blackbirds cross into tomorrow
and circle back on minute wings
while i stand and watch the clock
this everlasting ticking
the deadline triggers
i walk the line
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Filed under Dorothee Lang
Always love reading your work and this is certainly no exception. The ticking clock, the gun like racers on a starting line. Nice response to the theme.
Lovely Dorothee. Especially those first two haunting lines. Peace…
Short and deep.
Great imagery… love it!
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