Unseen by Catherine Russell

The thief crept quietly through the house, like a cat stalking its prey, until he spotted the object of his desire. Sneaking out hadn’t been easy, getting past the guardians more difficult still, but with his objective in sight his goal would almost certainly be accomplished.

How long had he lusted for this? Time had become a blur as he’d planned and schemed his way toward this moment. The item beckoned him. He reached for his prize.

His fingers barely grazed the outside of the container when he was blinded by a dazzling light. While his eyes adjusted, he cast a sharp, guilty look at his captor. “All right, young man,” commanded his mother. “I’ve had just about enough of this. You’ve earned yourself TWO nights without dessert.”

The pilferer hung his head in mock shame. Little did she realize, he knew where she’d hidden the Halloween candy.


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5 responses to “Unseen by Catherine Russell

  1. Ha ha … nicely built up and redirected.

  2. randalhoule

    Yes redirect is a great term for this. Nicely done.

  3. That’s really funny! Small confession, I would always wake up early on Easter and eat all the black jelly beans from all the baskets. I mean like I still do. Nice work.

  4. guy

    Oh man, i’m busted again. This was my childhood.

  5. Pingback: Week #21 – Unseen « 52|250 A Year of Flash

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