Something Jazzy by Walter Bjorkman

At the top of the subway stairs a line took him down into the depths of the tunnel, musky grays with vile creatures darting out of corners. It proceeded out into a sky of late Autumn sun desperately clinging to life in a shroud of winter air. It veered up five flights to a sweltering summer night on the roof, Sande in his arms, the barely moving air holding back suffocation from rotting streets below. It climbed a ladder to the stars where he rode a moonbeam to other galaxies. On the other side of the universe it took him to a tropical beach with piñas and niñas waiting for his delight. It boarded a catamaran sailing him back to the city, now in a Cuban-Chinese on eighth avenue, ropa vieja on his chin as fat ladies danced in the laundromat next door. It boarded a bus that clanged its way up to a bucolic meadow where people laughed, threw frisbees and fucked out of sight of police. A pelican picked up the line, drawing lazy patterns in the now gloriously blue sky, swooping him back to the station.

“Hey, pal — you gonna buy a token or just stand there like a looney from Bellevue?”

He dropped out of the token line and threw a twenty into the saxophone case of the player that layed down the solo line. Took off his coat and tie, dumped them in the trash, headed to Central Park to look for a moonbeam.

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7 responses to “Something Jazzy by Walter Bjorkman

  1. guy

    It’s different in tone and style, but i hear of “Do the strand” when i read this.

  2. Hey, pal, dump that tie. LOL This was a lot of fun.

  3. This would make an awesome music video for a Rashaan Roland Kirk song. I’ll let you know which one after I finish the album.

  4. Ah, WB, I don’t normally do this, but I gotta say, that is one terrific long line. -ME

  5. A dreamer! Oh I loved this!

  6. Walter

    Thanks, guys. Some background – Michelle put the title in place as an edit hold, waiting for my flash, so I decided to combine that with the long lines topic, and there it was, one of my own favorites. So, thanks, Michelle!

  7. Pingback: Week #23 – long lines « 52|250 A Year of Flash

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