Even though the fairground sirens were deafening, the flashing lights “Your fate is written on the palm of your hand. Show me your lifeline.” Instinctively, Katerina opened her hand, only to withdraw it, embarrassed. “Thank you,” she said, and walked on joining the crowds. She didn’t Katerina put the incident out of her mind – until next morning, when The woman followed her in. “What I said about your lifeline – I meant, I thought I saw…” Katerina held out her hand: a deep wound still oozing blood. The woman cringed. “I should have told you straight, but I was trying to break the ice Letting the elevator door slam shut, Katerina faintly heard her saying, “… the unequal dilation of your pupils… a sign of a neurological |
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Letting the door slam shut by Stella Pierides
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Yikes! I was a little suspicious of the way the lights mesmerised her. Wow.
Nicely tied in!
Very nice turn at the end.
Thank you ganymeder, suasan, EKSwitaj for your good words!
I tried to recreate in the reader Katerina’s dismissive and rush attitude towards “palmistry” and the respectful reaction towards science – isn’it it a sort of prejudice we have towards what we consider “lower,” less scientific/older/folk disciplines?
This really resonated. If only health care providers would look at us in the eyes — perhaps they’d be better at their craft? (and I use that word purposively — I AM a health care provider). Powerful stuff. Peace…
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