Watching the Clock by Elizabeth Kate Switaj

Benjamin did everything by the clock. He ate when the little hand pointed to five and the big hand pointed to six. He danced when the little hand pointed to three and the big hand pointed to seven. He slept when they both hit twelve.

To be more precise, he did everything according to his copper pocketwatch. It was hand-wound, and it ticked too slow as it ran down, and it ticked too fast when he wound it back up. Benjamin never tried to set it aright.

His friends called him spontaneous. He’d consult his watch in the middle of a movie and stand up, asking if they wanted tacos. He’d sleep on the beach, on a bus stop bench, in a French restaurant with his head in his plate. His relationships never lasted long. Neither did his jobs. Fortunately, Benjamin was a good enough writer to make a living beginning an article every time the big hand passed four.

One day, his watch stopped and wouldn’t wind. Benjamin thought about getting it repaired but knew it wouldn’t be the same. What had he lived for all these years?

He packed a can of kerosene in his rucksack and made his way to Westlake Station, where he watched the giant terracotta clock.

—When the big hand passes eight, I’ll douse myself and burn.

Then he realized he’d forgotten his lighter.

For the first time, Benjamin was lost.


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11 responses to “Watching the Clock by Elizabeth Kate Switaj

  1. Al McDermid

    Wow, what I strange story (by which I mean, I liked it). Spontaneous to the outside world, but only because he’s running according to his own clock.

  2. Len

    i loved this. very smart writing.

  3. Nicely done, I like the character and his need for direction.

  4. Love the way your character is tied to time but can’t function when it’s up. Fabulistic story, very much enjoyed. Peace…

  5. “His friends called him spontaneous.”
    I really like the concept of this character. Doing everything by a watch that’s broken. Everything on schedule, to him. That’s a really cool idea.

  6. Kim Hutchinson

    Love his need for order that his friends completely misunderstand, and the ending is a nice twist.

  7. He was lost without his watch to tell him when to be spontaneous. Gotta love the logic! :) Nice writing.

  8. I liked this very much. Fascinating character. Reminds me of the expression “give him time.” Except, of course, he took it himself, until the watch broke! Thanks.

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