Distantly The door of today The latest scenes My eyes My body My life your camera Closing, yet making farther, Whether seeing, |
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Departure, Personally by Walter Bjorkman
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Distantly The door of today The latest scenes My eyes My body My life your camera Closing, yet making farther, Whether seeing, |
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Filed under Walter Bjorkman
I especially liked this poem, Walter.
This struck me as very lyrical. Nice.
In reading this, I have looked into the future and seen the past. A beautiful poem.
You never cease to amaze me. You do it all – short stories, poems, flash fiction. And well. And this is no exception.
My favorite part in this one:
“My life your camera
to my perceptions
of the past…”
great rhythm and bounce
Lovely
A sad and perceptive poem as seen through the eyes and the lens. You should have put up a photo image with this one, Walt. Beautiful..
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A wonderful poem, Walter. I love how it moves via motion and distance words, and how the relationship is like a layer on top. Nice.