by | March 13, 2011 · 9:52 am
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Sangatsu by Kelly Grotke

You may say a crowd

Surges and ebbs like water,

But the crowd is gone.

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9 responses to “Sangatsu by Kelly Grotke”

  1. Chelsea
    March 16, 2011 at 9:05 pm

    lovely, the lines themselves surge then ebb, then: the poem is gone
    bravo!

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  2. susan
    March 17, 2011 at 4:24 am

    Great Haiku here, visual and precise.

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  3. rgv7735
    March 18, 2011 at 5:50 am

    All hail the great form: haiku! Nice use of the theme and excellent word choices.

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  4. len kuntz
    March 18, 2011 at 12:08 pm

    a tight little razor blade. nice.

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  6. Michael
    March 19, 2011 at 1:30 pm

    Is this the shortest entry ever? If it is or not, it’s wonderful.

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  7. Kelly
    March 20, 2011 at 4:32 am

    thanks, everyone – I’m grateful to you for the reads & responses.

    Reply
  8. LindaSW
    March 23, 2011 at 6:58 pm

    lovely haiku. and so darn true. peace…

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