You may say a crowd
Surges and ebbs like water,
But the crowd is gone.
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lovely, the lines themselves surge then ebb, then: the poem is gone
Great Haiku here, visual and precise.
All hail the great form: haiku! Nice use of the theme and excellent word choices.
a tight little razor blade. nice.
Is this the shortest entry ever? If it is or not, it’s wonderful.
thanks, everyone – I’m grateful to you for the reads & responses.
lovely haiku. and so darn true. peace…
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