Sangatsu by Kelly Grotke

You may say a crowd

Surges and ebbs like water,

But the crowd is gone.

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9 responses to “Sangatsu by Kelly Grotke

  1. lovely, the lines themselves surge then ebb, then: the poem is gone
    bravo!

  2. Great Haiku here, visual and precise.

  3. All hail the great form: haiku! Nice use of the theme and excellent word choices.

  4. len kuntz

    a tight little razor blade. nice.

  5. Is this the shortest entry ever? If it is or not, it’s wonderful.

  6. Kelly

    thanks, everyone – I’m grateful to you for the reads & responses.

  7. lovely haiku. and so darn true. peace…

  8. Pingback: Week #44 – Crowd | 52|250 A Year of Flash

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