of life –
of b/oxed hopes,
of I th/ink
a little higher
a little edgier
we w/ill leave,
by the hidden mean/ings
of our words –
all those layers
we haven’t been
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This is wonderfully structured, Dorothee, and your usual double meaning of words is played to its finest in this piece.
Oh I love how you do this. Brilliant. Peace…
Always good, and this is no exception. Really like this poem!
This works very well! unlocks the cages of words!
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