The Gift by Michelle Elvy

Jane bought Jerry a new phone for his birthday because he didn’t want to share any more. They had shared everything in their life together, and she really didn’t need her own phone, but when he said sharing had turned to controlling, she thought she’d try something new, let go a little.

Now Jerry texts and telephones all day while Jane wonders when he’ll start talking to her again.

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4 responses to “The Gift by Michelle Elvy

  1. You’ve revealed the troubled relationship and history in such concise form, Michelle!

  2. Lou

    Michelle, leave it to you to capture so much history, and pain and loss, and hope, with so few words. You are amazing at this.

  3. so concise, so perfect. peace…

  4. Pingback: Week #51 – Unintended Consequences | 52|250 A Year of Flash

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