All wanted him to remember to do something. He did something. “Was that it?” he asked all. “No,” said all. He did another something. “Was that it?” “No,” all answered. He did something else. “Was THAT it?” he asked all a third time. “No,” all said, “I apologize. It was indeed something.” “I wish you’d told me that, then, all,” he said. “I knew it was something!” “Well, you see, after you finished doing something else I remembered it was something that I wanted you to do, not another something or something else which, had I remembered it was something from the beginning, I would’ve stopped there and congratulated you on doing something. Again, I apologize for all this.” “Then, is that all, all?” “That will be all,” all replied. |
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A Day of Remembrance by Eryk Wenziak
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Charmingly absurd.
I agree with that! :-) (More absurd than charming, though!)
what a tongue-twister.
Len, wath makth you say thath?
:-)
How often we forget to congratulate others for those somethings that they do. Instead, we spend our life waiting for them to do that something else. This was an excellent piece, I really enjoyed it!
Thank you, K, that was very kind of you. Glad you enjoyed it. I like your take on it.
Yeah, I like this piece too. Not sure I understand quite what is going on, and not sure that I need to. Its just quirky, challenging, thoughtful and in some strange way, quite meditative. Thanks, Eryk, its been a real gift.
Martin, you’re very kind. I really appreciate your comments. I have to tell you, it was a bit weird to write, too. It was one of those pieces that wrote itself and left me the next morning with, “Okay, now what’s this thing all about?” (I’m not sure if I even know, at this point!) :-)
Have a great weekend.
I think you captured the hectic lifestyle that we all now have. Simple things just keep going by us as we repeat more of the same and we forget the “all” we have just done.
Amen! Got that right. I’m glad you enjoyed, Lauren, and thanks so much for reading it.
Hahaha! Love the circularity of this, a very Escher feel. Wonderfully absurd indeed. peace…
My life kind of goes in circles, too, so it’s not surprising I came up with this! :-) Thank you for your kind words.
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